I will be your romance developmental editor and manuscript critique

Are you struggling with flat romantic chemistry, weak character motivations, or pacing issues that stall your love story? 

As a specialized romance developmental editor, I analyze your manuscript to turn your rough draft into a page-turning romance masterpiece. I provide actionable, creative solutions to elevate your storytelling while keeping your unique voice intact.

What I evaluate in your romance manuscript:

• Romantic Chemistry: Ensuring the emotional and physical pull between your leads is believable.
• Tropes & Pacing: Polishing your enemies-to-lovers, slow-burn, or fake-dating beats.
• Character Growth: Refining individual flaws, internal conflicts, and emotional arcs.
• Plot Integrity: Checking for logic holes and satisfying conflict resolution.

What you will receive:

1. A detailed Editorial Letter breaking down major story elements.

2. Inline Comments directly on your Microsoft Word manuscript.

Note: This gig focuses strictly on story structure, plot, and character development. It does not include grammar proofreading.

Please message me before ordering to discuss your project!