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I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently a Medical student, former English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedb...
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environmolds
Estados Unidos
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
México
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Holanda
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canadá
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
Estados Unidos
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
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Orders are open! Please, DM me and I will send you my reports structure!
NO AI USED! 100%-vetted, detailed structural analysis!
I'm a passionate reader and experienced beta reader specializing in romance, dark, fantasy, thriller, historical, supernatural, isekai, LitRPG and erotica stories. I know how readers feel, what keeps them turning pages, and what makes them put a book down.
My goal is to deliver an honest report about the reading experience, find inconsistencies and give you suggestions on how to fix them.
I offer detailed, honest, and emotionally grounded feedback to help you improve:
- Plot and Structure
- Pacing
- Readability
- Character development
- Emotional Depth
- Plot holes and Inconsistencies (+suggestions)
- Overall feedback
- Q&A
What you'll receive:
- A clear, organized feedback report (PDF)
- Summary of whats working and what needs polishing
My feedback is honest, respectful, and constructive. I'm here to help you shape your manuscript into its best version, whether it's a spicy romance or a deep emotional fantasy.
Let's make your story shine!
Idioma:
Inglês
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Português
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Which format shoud I send my manuscript?
Preferably Word or PDF, but I accept other formats too.
Do you write in-line comments?
Unfortunately, I don’t work with in-line commentary anymore. I provide the in-depth analysis by writing you a report.
What is the length of the report I will receive?
It depends on the length of your manuscript. But here’s a simplified preview: - Simple package (up to 5,000 words manuscripts): around 4-5 pages - Intermediate package: (up to 50,000 words manuscripts) around 6-7 pages - Premium package (up to 100,000 words manuscripts): around 9-10 pages
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely! I will not share, by any means, your manuscript with anyone.
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E essiet08
Estados Unidos
Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
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Útil?M markiebaby
Estados Unidos
Vivian provided an excellent Beta Review of my novel. She pointed out positive aspects and inconsistencies in a detailed report. She also closely followed my brief by answering specific questions on story arc, structure, and characters. Great work!
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Útil?M michaelawillis
Estados Unidos
Vivian's insight into the first manuscript of my novel was very insightful. She pointed out in immense detail of what was working and what needed further development in my novel. I will definitely be back and use her service when I am done writing the second novel of my book series. I would definitely...
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Útil?B brandynordick
Canadá
Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,...
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Útil?A alannaroselynch
Estados Unidos
Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments...
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E essiet08
Estados Unidos
Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
Até US$ 50
$
4 dias
Tempo
Útil?M markiebaby
Estados Unidos
Vivian provided an excellent Beta Review of my novel. She pointed out positive aspects and inconsistencies in a detailed report. She also closely followed my brief by answering specific questions on story arc, structure, and characters. Great work!
US$ 50-US$ 100
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5 dias
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Útil?M michaelawillis
Estados Unidos
Vivian's insight into the first manuscript of my novel was very insightful. She pointed out in immense detail of what was working and what needed further development in my novel. I will definitely be back and use her service when I am done writing the second novel of my book series. I would definitely...
US$ 200-US$ 400
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10 dias
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Útil?B brandynordick
Canadá
Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,...
US$ 100-US$ 200
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7 dias
Tempo
Útil?A alannaroselynch
Estados Unidos
Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments...
US$ 200-US$ 400
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2 semanas
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