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I will read your script or screenplay to give you feedback coverage
I am a screenwriter with a degree in Film and Media Arts. I have studied and worked in multiple academic film programs both in Los Angeles, and Philadelphia.
I did script and book coverage at a liter...
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Sobre este Serviço
Have you written a script that you want feedback on? Look no further!
If you send me your script, I will read it and write coverage addressing what works in your script and what areas need improvement.
Each screenplay coverage includes a logline (1-2 sentence summary of your film's premise), a score sheet (grading your script on various elements - tone/characters/dialogue etc) and 1-2 pages of notes (depending on the tier selected) that explain my feedback in greater detail.
*Note: This gig's Proofreading Add-On is intended as a way to further polish your script - if you have errors on every page or you are not proficient in English I suggest looking for proofreader/translator gigs before submitting to me.* Message me if you have questions!
I believe that most story ideas have potential, but often they get lost in translation between our minds and the page. With that in mind, I will analyze your script and try to highlight the parts that best communicate your unique story as well as bring your attention to the parts that aren't quite there yet.
In short, if you send me your script I'll do my best to answer the question:
How can we take this good idea and make it better?
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Inglês
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Perguntas frequentes
What if my script is longer than 120 pages?
No problem! Shoot me a message with your page count and we can figure it out!
Can you proofread my script?
Sadly No. I focus mainly on story notes rather than nitpicking sentences that might be removed in your next rewrite. NOTE: If you aren't proficient in English it might be hard for me to fairly evaluate the core of your script, so I recommend finding a translator elsewhere on Fiverr to help first.
What if my short film is longer than 30 pages? Or my feature is less than 80?
I broke up the tiers based on how many pages I would be reading and the work that comes with that. So choose the tier with the page range that your page count falls under, regardless of content or format.
What is the scoresheet for?
The scoresheet is a tool to help me indicate my overall perception of your script's strengths/weaknesses in various categories. A low score is just a place for potential improvement. If something scores low it is my practice to elaborate more on that element in the notes section of the coverage.
I don't have a script per se... Can you evaluate my treatment/outline/summary?
I can and I have. :) The best way for me to help with these shorter-forms of writing is to make custom orders based on your specific needs so please reach out to me so we can discuss what you're looking for and I can provide you with a 'quote'.
What about a Pitch Deck?*
I can give narrative/thematic feedback, but it will be mainly focused on the story as presented ie. strengths/weaknesses or areas that need more clarity. If you are looking for presentation advice about how to make the pitch itself more polished I recommend looking elsewhere. *Message for price est.
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S stevenh99
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Solid notes. Thoughtful and constructive. Thanks!
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Just what I needed. Will work with Mark again in the future.
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Útil?D damianwisniewsk
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Received great coverage of my screenplay which will really help to improve my screenplay and my writing.
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Útil?D danieljordan818
Estados Unidos
Interesting ideas. Clearly an intelligent and creative reader!
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Útil?R ronniewa
Estados Unidos
Mark gave honest feedback on my work, which I needed. I appreciate his insight. I would definitely work with him again.
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Avaliações
70 avaliações deste Serviço
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S stevenh99
Estados Unidos
Solid notes. Thoughtful and constructive. Thanks!
US$ 50-US$ 100
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Útil?E easternsunz
Estados Unidos
Just what I needed. Will work with Mark again in the future.
US$ 50-US$ 100
$
6 dias
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Útil?D damianwisniewsk
Reino Unido
Received great coverage of my screenplay which will really help to improve my screenplay and my writing.
US$ 50-US$ 100
$
7 dias
Tempo
Útil?D danieljordan818
Estados Unidos
Interesting ideas. Clearly an intelligent and creative reader!
US$ 50-US$ 100
$
6 dias
Tempo
Útil?R ronniewa
Estados Unidos
Mark gave honest feedback on my work, which I needed. I appreciate his insight. I would definitely work with him again.
US$ 50
$
5 dias
Tempo
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