I will critique your query package

Your query package has one job: make someone want to read more.

I will critique your query package from a reader-and-editor perspective, looking beyond grammar to the things that can actually affect how your submission lands.

I can review your:

1. Query letter
2. Synopsis
3. Opening pages
4. Pitch / hook
5. Author bio
6. Overall submission presentation

I'll look at whether the story is immediately clear, whether the hook creates curiosity, whether the stakes are strong, whether the query sounds natural, and whether the package feels ready to send.

You won't just get this is good or change this sentence.

You'll receive specific, practical feedback showing what is working, what is weakening the submission, and where I think you should make changes.

Whether you're preparing to query literary agents, approach publishers, enter a competition, or simply want another set of eyes before submitting, Ill give you an honest outside perspective.

Send me your package, and lets see how it reads before you hit send.