Vou ler a versão beta do seu romance e dar um feedback detalhado
Descubra, aprenda e domine seu manuscrito.
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lewsir

Estados Unidos
Elena provide a very insightful review of my draft. Lot's of great advice and it is clear she has done this many times - she has a strong sense of how to progress...
briggles_uni82

Austrália
Elena gave me plenty to think about, and lots of great feedback about pacing, structure, and the characters themselves. Some of the feedback, I already knew...
jessicalesliew

Estados Unidos
I have worked with Elena several times over the course of drafting my manuscript and she's always so helpful. She reads carefully, thinks critically and always...
galantemon

Austrália
Elena was very communicative and lovely to talk to. She definitely brought a different perspective to my work and gave valuable feedback that I will be taking...
panaahpsych

Austrália
Elena is an excellent beta reader! She was so thoughtful in her review and provided very useful feedback. I will not hesitate to use her services again.
Sobre este Serviço
Olá! Eu sou a Elena e adoro ajudar escritores a dar vida às suas histórias. Com minha experiência e conhecimento em storytelling, adoraria ter a oportunidade de te dar um feedback sobre seu romance!
Minha tarifa é de $1,50 USD por 1.000 palavras.
NOTA: Não trabalho com ninguém que tenha usado IA generativa para escrever seu romance de qualquer forma.
Como beta reader, escrevo comentários de opiniões, pensamentos e feedbacks, então você receberá minhas primeiras impressões enquanto avanço pelo seu manuscrito.
Ao fornecer feedback, foco em:
- Enredo
- Desenvolvimento de personagens
- Estrutura
- Tensão e conflito
No relatório de leitura que forneço, respondo às seguintes perguntas para que você possa entender a experiência do leitor com sua história, o que funciona e o que pode melhorar:
- Como foi o hook, e foi intrigante o suficiente para eu querer continuar?
- O enredo foi envolvente e fácil de acompanhar?
- Os personagens foram relacionáveis, críveis e bem desenvolvidos?
- O diálogo foi natural?
- Como foi a tensão e o ritmo da história?
- Quais foram minhas partes favoritas?
- O que acredito que pode ser melhorado?
- Eu gostei do livro?
Sinta-se à vontade para mencionar qualquer questão que gostaria que eu focasse!
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L lewsir

Estados Unidos
Elena provide a very insightful review of my draft. Lot's of great advice and it is clear she has done this many times - she has a strong sense of how to progress a story, flesh out the characters, etc. I will be acting on most of her recommendations. Thanks Elena!
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2 semanas
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Útil?B briggles_uni82

Austrália
Elena gave me plenty to think about, and lots of great feedback about pacing, structure, and the characters themselves. Some of the feedback, I already knew and so it was great to have someone else confirm what I was thinking. At the same time, having completely unexpected feedback that I hadn't considered,...
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11 dias
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jessicalesliew

Estados Unidos
I have worked with Elena several times over the course of drafting my manuscript and she's always so helpful. She reads carefully, thinks critically and always provides suggestions that help spur new ideas. I'm so grateful to have found her!
US$ 100-US$ 200
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2 semanas
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Útil?G galantemon

Austrália
Elena was very communicative and lovely to talk to. She definitely brought a different perspective to my work and gave valuable feedback that I will be taking on and actioning. It was very helpful to see her inline reactions to the story as well. Thank you!
US$ 100-US$ 200
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2 semanas
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Útil?P panaahpsych

Austrália
Elena is an excellent beta reader! She was so thoughtful in her review and provided very useful feedback. I will not hesitate to use her services again.
US$ 50-US$ 100
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6 dias
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45 avaliações deste Serviço
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L lewsir

Estados Unidos
Elena provide a very insightful review of my draft. Lot's of great advice and it is clear she has done this many times - she has a strong sense of how to progress a story, flesh out the characters, etc. I will be acting on most of her recommendations. Thanks Elena!
US$ 50-US$ 100
$
2 semanas
Tempo
Útil?B briggles_uni82

Austrália
Elena gave me plenty to think about, and lots of great feedback about pacing, structure, and the characters themselves. Some of the feedback, I already knew and so it was great to have someone else confirm what I was thinking. At the same time, having completely unexpected feedback that I hadn't considered,...
US$ 50-US$ 100
$
11 dias
Tempo
Útil?J 
jessicalesliew

Estados Unidos
I have worked with Elena several times over the course of drafting my manuscript and she's always so helpful. She reads carefully, thinks critically and always provides suggestions that help spur new ideas. I'm so grateful to have found her!
US$ 100-US$ 200
$
2 semanas
Tempo
Útil?G galantemon

Austrália
Elena was very communicative and lovely to talk to. She definitely brought a different perspective to my work and gave valuable feedback that I will be taking on and actioning. It was very helpful to see her inline reactions to the story as well. Thank you!
US$ 100-US$ 200
$
2 semanas
Tempo
Útil?P panaahpsych

Austrália
Elena is an excellent beta reader! She was so thoughtful in her review and provided very useful feedback. I will not hesitate to use her services again.
US$ 50-US$ 100
$
6 dias
Tempo
Útil?

