I will developmental edit mystery thriller novel for plot hole, pacing for indie author

Need a developmental editor for your thriller or mystery novel? I provide manuscript editing to fix plot holes, pacing, weak characters and story structure.

Is your thriller or mystery manuscript finished, but you're unsure whether the plot works, the pacing holds attention, or your twists deliver the impact you want?

As a developmental editor and fiction editor, I look beyond grammar to examine the story itself. I'll identify what is weakening your manuscript, explain why it matters, and give you practical direction for your next revision.

You'll receive:

• Plot, structure & pacing analysis
• Plot-hole and continuity review
• Character arcs, motivations & development
• Suspense, tension, clues & twist assessment
• Chapter flow and story progression feedback
• Inline developmental comments where needed
• Clear revision recommendations

This service is ideal for thriller, mystery, suspense, psychological thriller, crime fiction and horror authors preparing a novel for self publishing or Amazon KDP.

I also offer beta reading, manuscript critique, proofreading, line editing, copy editing to help your manuscript. CONTACT ME NOW!