I will give feedback on your screenplay

I will read your script and provide in-depth, professional feedback during our Zoom sessions. Together, well break down every key element of your screenplay, including structure, pacing, dialogue, and character development:

• I will use my experience as a writer and my background in development for a major studio to provide industry-level insights on how to elevate your script.

• We'll discuss concrete suggestions on how to refine your story, tighten your structure, and enhance your characters to make your script more competitive for the market. Step by step, we'll work through ways to strengthen your material and ensure it stands out

• We'll devise a clear, actionable plan to move forward, helping you not only improve your script but also tap into the emotional truth of the story you're trying to tell.

Whether you need guidance on pacing, character depth, or overall impact, this session will give you the tools to take your project to the next level.